QUOTE(Sepulcher @ Mar 19 2012, 04:59 PM) 
What do you guys think?
Pretty awesome 
The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
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Posted 19 March 2012 - 07:20 PM
Thanks NoeL! I really appreciate that! Any critique is welcome as I want to make sure my screen design stays top-notch.
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Posted 19 March 2012 - 07:23 PM
I like the structure, Sepulcher. But, where is the...I don't know. The excitement maybe? It seems rather plain and boring.
Edited by Jared, 19 March 2012 - 07:24 PM.
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Posted 19 March 2012 - 07:30 PM
Well, to put it simply I am in the process of setting the tileset up and stuff like that. The two new screens are incomplete because I will go back and add some things like people of course. There will also be some nice little "secrets" in these screens that you will find later on in the game. ^__^
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Posted 20 March 2012 - 01:25 PM
EDIT: Image removed.
Edited by blackbishop89, 24 March 2012 - 02:14 PM.
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Posted 28 March 2012 - 08:23 PM
http://imageshack.us...5/zelda009.png/
i made this screen for my 1st dungeon 3rd fl
ideas, thoughts, concerns?
i made this screen for my 1st dungeon 3rd fl
ideas, thoughts, concerns?
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Posted 28 March 2012 - 08:27 PM
It looks okay...but there's nothing that really stands out. 
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Posted 28 March 2012 - 11:47 PM
@Nightmares:
It needs more detail. Add some wall decorations(torches, vines, etc.) and some floor decorations. Also, it looks weird to have those dead bush things growing out of the tile floor. Try making the area they're in a grassy patch.
The background fog might look better if it were transparent, but I could be wrong about that.
It needs more detail. Add some wall decorations(torches, vines, etc.) and some floor decorations. Also, it looks weird to have those dead bush things growing out of the tile floor. Try making the area they're in a grassy patch.
The background fog might look better if it were transparent, but I could be wrong about that.
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Posted 03 April 2012 - 04:40 PM
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Posted 03 April 2012 - 05:19 PM
Oh I like it! But the deep water uses too much detail I guess, Idk if you made it animate or not~
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Posted 03 April 2012 - 05:41 PM
QUOTE(Theryan @ Mar 29 2012, 12:47 AM)
@Nightmares:
It needs more detail. Add some wall decorations(torches, vines, etc.) and some floor decorations. Also, it looks weird to have those dead bush things growing out of the tile floor. Try making the area they're in a grassy patch.
The background fog might look better if it were transparent, but I could be wrong about that.
thats good feedback but i've decided to go ahead and make the boss on this floor and not use this screen
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Posted 03 April 2012 - 08:40 PM
Thanks Gonken, but I disagree the water is simply blue with light blue spots.
Any more feedback guys? Even the smallest amount means a lot to me.
Any more feedback guys? Even the smallest amount means a lot to me.
Edited by blackbishop89, 03 April 2012 - 08:44 PM.
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Posted 03 April 2012 - 08:50 PM
I like it. But, it could use more dirt. The ground is extremely bare.
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Posted 03 April 2012 - 08:56 PM
What do you mean by dirt?
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Posted 03 April 2012 - 09:04 PM
Those little brown specks.
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