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#2476 Marco

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Posted 20 February 2012 - 10:22 PM

I'm editing all sprites, but here's not the place to go in depth about the sprites themselves.

I'm unfamiliar with blue_knights stuff other than seeing kick ass screens. I don't do scripts; this is all pure 2.5 creativity.

#2477 Dawnlight

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Posted 20 February 2012 - 10:29 PM

QUOTE(Dragonite @ Feb 20 2012, 04:56 PM) View Post


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I think that looks perfect. It doesn't look cramped at all. IMO, I think you should use the GB Tileset for your quest.

#2478 Moon

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 09:27 PM

Here is another screenshot for you all.

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#2479 Ica

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 09:35 PM

That's nice. Not much else to add. A little bit too green.

#2480 Shane

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 09:53 PM

QUOTE(Dragonite @ Feb 22 2012, 11:57 AM) View Post

Here is another screenshot for you all.

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Personally to me it looks cluttered. But otherwise it's nice.

#2481 Moon

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 10:10 PM

QUOTE(Shane @ Feb 21 2012, 09:53 PM) View Post

To me it looks cluttered.
How so?


#2482 Jared

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 10:17 PM

QUOTE(Dragonite @ Feb 21 2012, 10:10 PM) View Post

How so?

It might be the trees in the bottom right. They seem to make the screen a little more closed up than it needs to be.

#2483 Marco

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 10:18 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Feb 21 2012, 08:17 PM) View Post

It might be the trees in the bottom right. They seem to make the screen a little more closed up than it needs to be.


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Your screen isn't crammed. Those trees, I feel, make the area flow better. Otherwise, it would be an odd, open screen.

#2484 Shane

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 10:27 PM

QUOTE(Dragonite @ Feb 22 2012, 12:40 PM) View Post

How so?


Too many details IMO.

#2485 Dawnlight

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 10:53 PM

It doesn't look cluttered at all. I say it needs more activity as in people.

#2486 Neppy

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 10:56 PM

QUOTE(Dragonite @ Feb 21 2012, 08:27 PM) View Post
Here is another screenshot for you all.

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I like it, I really do, but perhaps back off on the ground details just a little. Just a suggestion. icon_smile.gif

#2487 Russ

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 11:20 PM

Why are people so picky on the ground detail? I think it looks perfect. Good design, just the right amount of ground detail, all around please to the eye. Good job.

#2488 Shane

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 11:23 PM

It's just my opinion. icon_razz.gif

I prefer the GB set the simple way it was intended to be, that's the pure form of GB. But again IMO.

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Now this is the origins of why and how trespassing was a law. icon_deformed.gif


Yes, it's a cutscene... and yes there is a female that has a crush on Link and yes she is walking up to Link's bed...

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...to wake him up. icon_heh.gif ...And let's hope Link's dairy doesn't have anything related to another relationship. *runs*

Edited by Shane, 22 February 2012 - 07:23 AM.


#2489 Sheik

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Posted 22 February 2012 - 02:53 PM

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A silent sage at Lanayru Bay.

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Posted 22 February 2012 - 03:56 PM

QUOTE(Yoshimi @ Feb 22 2012, 12:53 PM) View Post

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A silent sage at Lanayru Bay.

Had to comment here. I love the screen design, with that path coming from the right and an off centered path coming from the top, but the two not intersecting, and the tree, plant, and object placements. It feels good with that environment you're going for there. I'm interested in seeing this or something similar in color, and listening to some well fitting music.


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