The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
#2416
Posted 16 February 2012 - 11:13 PM
#2417
Posted 16 February 2012 - 11:15 PM
#2418
Posted 16 February 2012 - 11:31 PM

I'm pretty sure I'm misusing the tileset, but I'm having problems improving. Help appreciated.
Edited by Evan20000, 17 February 2012 - 12:19 AM.
#2419
Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:02 AM

An introductory cave.

First room of Level 1 - Swamp Well.



I'm pretty sure I'm misusing the tileset, but I'm having problems improving. Help appreciated.
#2420
Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:15 AM
#2421
Posted 17 February 2012 - 12:16 AM
I may put up some dungeon screens when I start working on level 4 of my quest.
Edit: Yeah, I'll resize it.
Edited by Evan20000, 17 February 2012 - 12:17 AM.
#2422
Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:14 AM
#2423
Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:16 AM
#2424
Posted 17 February 2012 - 03:24 AM
Slightly unsure about this: is the variety of grass details too much here? I can't decide if I should use a few different types per area or just mix them all together like this.

I strongly recommand using one or at maximum two different sets of grass detail per area. Throwing them all together looks chaotic (in a negative way).
#2425
Posted 17 February 2012 - 05:49 AM
#2426
Posted 17 February 2012 - 10:19 AM
#2427
Posted 17 February 2012 - 10:25 AM
#2428
Posted 17 February 2012 - 01:29 PM
#2429
Posted 17 February 2012 - 05:26 PM

Mostly edits. With some helpful advice and suggestions from Gonken
Edited by Yoshimi, 17 February 2012 - 05:27 PM.
#2430
Posted 17 February 2012 - 05:28 PM
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