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#2401 Neppy

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 04:49 PM

QUOTE(Dragonite @ Feb 15 2012, 10:17 PM) View Post
Well, it seems that I'm pretty good at DoR tileset, although its not very easy to use, it allows me to express my screen designing ability (Not bragging or anything.)

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(P.S I'm sorry Marco, I missed you map, it looks really cool)
I think this screen looks pretty good. The one thing that I think could use changing, is the roof color. Green may not be the best color to use for a roof is the surrounding is all green too. Would be fine if the surrounding was all dirt, or something else. icon_shrug.gif
QUOTE(Marco @ Feb 16 2012, 08:47 AM) View Post
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I can't think of a caption. Gold, baby!
Once again, another lovely screen. As I've said before, I can't wait to see it in action.

#2402 Moon

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 05:32 PM

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#2403 Neppy

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 05:36 PM

That's a very solid screen Dragonite. I like the wall torch placement, and the choice of tile for the flat surfaces on the first layer of wall was very good.

#2404 Supindahood

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 05:36 PM

Looks cool, but you can remove the 2 tile border thingy up the stairs. that would look better icon_smile.gif

#2405 Dawnlight

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 05:42 PM

Simple, yet decent. I would say add a few bones to the ground. Other than that. It's a very solid screen.

#2406 Moon

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 05:57 PM

Thanks for the suggestions.
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Also a new screen.
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#2407 Dawnlight

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 06:00 PM

You could also try to spice up the floor palette. It doesn't have to follow the colors on the walls. Experiment with different colors.

#2408 Neppy

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 06:02 PM

I've actually made a cave/cavern black rather then brown before, and it looked great. Quite a difference, but it was out of the ordinary. Kind of made it look like it was made of coal. You could give that a try if you wanted.

#2409 NoeL

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 06:35 PM

QUOTE(Marco @ Feb 16 2012, 08:47 AM) View Post
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I can't think of a caption. Gold, baby!
More like "Brown, baby!" (eew, brown babies! XD )

But yeah, the palette could use some work. Looks almost sepia as it is.

Edited by NoeL, 16 February 2012 - 06:35 PM.


#2410 Moon

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 07:31 PM

QUOTE(NoeL @ Feb 16 2012, 06:35 PM) View Post

More like "Brown, baby!" (eew, brown babies! XD )
You racist NoeL? lol


QUOTE(Marco @ Feb 16 2012, 09:47 AM) View Post

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I can't think of a caption. Gold, baby!
Looks great icon_smile.gif




#2411 Obderhode

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 07:33 PM

Trying to work on my interior screens skills. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. icon_smile.gif

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An introductory cave.

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First room of Level 1 - Swamp Well.

#2412 NoeL

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 07:57 PM

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You racist NoeL? lol
I was talking about poops. icon_sigh.gif


#2413 Moonbread

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 10:56 PM

...okay then, guys. How about screenshots, too. : |

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#2414 Jared

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 11:05 PM

I think the waterfalls' bottom are one tile too far down. Otherwise, amazing. icon_smile.gif

#2415 Moonbread

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Posted 16 February 2012 - 11:08 PM

Well, Jared, waterfalls don't always fall down perfectly straight, but typically slanted; and they also tend to have space behind them. And for another fun fact, it messes up the adjacent mountain/water transition tile when its bottom is one tile up.


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