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[Jared]

I think it's the overabundant (Too much) dirt. Try putting some more grass.

[Bourkification]

I think it's the overabundant (Too much) dirt. Try putting some more grass.

Yes, that's it. Make the path less wide; make it more skinny.

And this is some of your best designing. So just stick to this tileset, and make quest from it. You are getting no where re-making the same area's with different tileset. I got caught up in the same trap.

[Moon]

Better?

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Edited by Dragonite, 10 February 2012 - 06:51 PM.

[Russ]

It's perfect. I think you've finally found your niche. Now go out there and start making a quest with this.

Jared, it looks pretty good, but I can't shake the feeling that it seems a but empty. If there's a small tree of some kind you could add to the left side of the river, north of the grass, I think that might make it perfect.

[Neppy]

I think this looks pretty good, but I think you need to add some shadow under the land bridge, to make it look like it's a land bridge. If not, it looks a little odd.

Better?

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I think this is looking pretty nice, but the flowers on the gravel path seem odd to me. I have always thought that it's weird to put them in gravel/sand/dirt paths, since that's what you think of as getting the most foot traffic. Otherwise this looks quite nice.

[Shane]

Another screen from my quest


Note: It is supposed to be pretty simple, but this screen seems to be missing something..

What happen to your GB quest? It looked nice.

A little too green, try a secondary colour for the tree. Also I feel like that the palette is making it feel empty.

Other then that, it looks pretty cool.

A little request.... FINISH YOUR QUEST!

Edited by Shane, 11 February 2012 - 12:24 AM.

[Moon]

I'll sure try to finish my quest, it's just a pain using ALttP houses, whenever I tried to make the screens below these with ALttP houses, they looked really stupid in the area I placed them...

[Shane]

I'll sure try to finish my quest, it's just a pain using ALttP houses, whenever I tried to make the screens below these with ALttP houses, they looked really stupid in the area I placed them...

Tip: Just place houses, I don't care where, just make it look good and finish the quest.

[Marco]

Psilocybin.

I would appreciate feedback, by all means. Though I am hoping for more than a, "that's cool." Please address full criticism.

This and my Z1 Remastering are my projects, going smoothly.

[Jared]

"That's cool"
That is just amazing, Marco. is the palette from the game? It accommodates the tiles greatly. The structure is also great. No way back if you jump off!

[Neppy]

Psilocybin.

I would appreciate feedback, by all means. Though I am hoping for more than a, "that's cool." Please address full criticism.

This and my Z1 Remastering are my projects, going smoothly.

I do have to say Marco, that your screen is very enjoyable. The whole nighttime theme that's going on is great. Do the stars sparkle at all? Very nice tilework! I would actually love to see this in action sometime.

[Moon]

Quest is coming along quite nicely, but this will be the last screen I show for awhile, I don't want to make the mistake of showing too much from my quest again....

[Dawnlight]

The water on the bottom left portion of the screen is missing a few tiles to go with the mountains. It looks like it's floating above it.

Edited by Dawnlight, 11 February 2012 - 09:33 PM.

[Moon]

Found the correct tiles and fixed it.

[Supindahood]

I like the flow in your screens! Keep it up.