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[Nightmeres]

OK something like this:picture

[Jared]

Absolutely perfect

[Nightmeres]

I really need some critiquing on this; http://img687.images...44/zelda001.png.

What do you guys think? Also, I put in the flowers, did them by hand.

I like these screens allot. there is nothing much I can say to critique them because I think they are amazing. but maybe add more debris like rocks or bolder here and there to spruce it up a bit. that's my opinion. Also I really think the flowers are very original. different then most I've seen.

[Jared]

Thank you! I'm probably going to add more debris around the "well" thing, because of story reasons.

[Lightwulf]

Decided to revision Timbersin Village for the third time, but this time, I've gone from LA tiles to semi-custom.

Shane, as long as you added a few rocks and things to spice it up, this screen looks great!
I thought the doorway was shaped a little weird, but I also think it doesn't have to be straight-down shaped either; different is cool. I'd like to see the closed-door version of it!

Critique this as harshly as you like; don't hold back. I'm really trying to improve my dungeon design.

Moo2wo, I must concur with Shane. The screen looks top-notch overall; but is there a purpose for that block in the corner? If you don't need it for anything, you could replace it with the base of a diagonal wall (as long as the appropriate diagonal wall tiles will work with such a tight space).

I really need some critiquing on this; http://img687.images...44/zelda001.png.

What do you guys think? Also, I put in the flowers, did them by hand.

Yeah, Jared, I must agree it's sweet!
I haven't played Minish Cap, so I wasn't quite certain about the way the blue color looks on the top tiles of the rooftops. At the very least, it doesn't detract from the screen. If that's how they're supposed to look, I can't complain.

OK something like this:picture

Looks great! At first I wasn't certain about the windows, but they are a nice touch, especially if this is a tower above ground.

However, I'm not sure I understand those... what looks like a pile of rubble sticking on the wall. I woulda' thought a pile of rubble would be clumped down on top of the walkable area. I'm not saying it's wrong necessarily, but what are those supposed to be?

[Nightmeres]

Shane, as long as you added a few rocks and things to spice it up, this screen looks great!
I thought the doorway was shaped a little weird, but I also think it doesn't have to be straight-down shaped either; different is cool. I'd like to see the closed-door version of it!
Moo2wo, I must concur with Shane. The screen looks top-notch overall; but is there a purpose for that block in the corner? If you don't need it for anything, you could replace it with the base of a diagonal wall (as long as the appropriate diagonal wall tiles will work with such a tight space).
Yeah, Jared, I must agree it's sweet!
I haven't played Minish Cap, so I wasn't quite certain about the way the blue color looks on the top tiles of the rooftops. At the very least, it doesn't detract from the screen. If that's how they're supposed to look, I can't complain.

Looks great! At first I wasn't certain about the windows, but they are a nice touch, especially if this is a tower above ground.

However, I'm not sure I understand those... what looks like a pile of rubble sticking on the wall. I woulda' thought a pile of rubble would be clumped down on top of the walkable area. I'm not saying it's wrong necessarily, but what are those supposed to be?

its meant to represent that the tower was not in use for a while. like its been there a while and in disrepair.

[Marco]

I'll be back in late March with tileset. Things are getting better, life in order.

[Neppy]

I do enjoy the tileset Marco. Very much so actually. Can't wait to open it up, and check it out in Zquest.

[Jay]

I'll be back in late March with tileset. Things are getting better, life in order.

That is amazing, best I've ever seen done with Classic !

Been busy lately, but tried a BS screen for fun, random with no purpose

[Neppy]

Looks nice Jay! Kinda makes me wanna build in BS.

[Octorockoncrack]

Test room for my water dungeon.

[Soarin]

Looks good Octorockoncrack I am thinking maybe some details on the side walls down at the bottom. Other then that it looks great.

[SpikeReynolds]

That is amazing, best I've ever seen done with Classic !

Been busy lately, but tried a BS screen for fun, random with no purpose

Love it. Great old-school BS design.

[Ica]

Jay: Great screen. Very good use of BS.

Octorockoncrack: Good, but I think the pillars are obstructive and unnecessary. Besides that it is a good screen.

Edited by Ica44, 31 January 2012 - 02:01 PM.

[Jay]

Thanks everyone ! Didn't think I would be good with B.S but if I am maybe I'll try something with it

Test room for my water dungeon.

I actually think that screen looks pretty cool !

How about this BS screen?



Edit: On the bottom left I removed those bushes they looked weird.

Edited by Jay, 31 January 2012 - 04:01 PM.