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#2251 Shane

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Posted 28 January 2012 - 09:58 PM

QUOTE(Nightmeres @ Jan 29 2012, 11:58 AM) View Post

@Spacemandan is this what you had in mind. i may have over done it with the "moss" efect


Much better, but it's too dark and every tile blends in with one another. icon_razz.gif

#2252 Nightmeres

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Posted 28 January 2012 - 10:14 PM

grass orno grass that is the question.

anyways that may of made it worse. what do you think.

#2253 cavthena

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Posted 29 January 2012 - 05:26 AM

QUOTE(Nightmeres @ Jan 28 2012, 06:28 PM) View Post

@Spacemandan is this what you had in mind. i may have over done it with the "moss" efect



I like these bricks icon_biggrin.gif maybe a few more shades of grey on those bricks could fix them up quite nicely.

And are we just critiquing the bricks or can we go wild on the rest of it as well? I assume it's still a WIP.

#2254 Jared

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Posted 29 January 2012 - 01:43 PM

QUOTE(Nightmeres @ Jan 28 2012, 10:14 PM) View Post

grass orno grass that is the question.

anyways that may of made it worse. what do you think.


I like the one with grass! Looks much better. icon_smile.gif

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Posted 29 January 2012 - 04:45 PM

I like the grass one, but perhaps you might wanna do something about how many diamond shapes you have on the right side of the screen. Too many I say.

#2256 Jared

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Posted 29 January 2012 - 08:59 PM

I really need some critiquing on this; http://img687.images...44/zelda001.png.

What do you guys think? Also, I put in the flowers, did them by hand. icon_smile.gif

#2257 Sheik

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 01:36 AM

Um, didn't Robin make this flowers "by hand"? I'm pretty sure he did. Anyways, the map is nice layout wise but these brown spots on the trees look wrong. Good work none the less, still.

#2258 Shane

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 03:16 AM

QUOTE(Yoshimi @ Jan 30 2012, 04:06 PM) View Post

Um, didn't Robin make this flowers "by hand"? I'm pretty sure he did.


Maybe he added them into his quest by remaking them by hand? I a bit confused myself. icon_razz.gif

Anyways, Jared it looks great! Like the well(?) in the graveyard. :O

Edited by Shane, 30 January 2012 - 03:17 AM.


#2259 Soarin

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 09:47 AM

Nicely done Jared I like the well you put in the up left That is a good idea to use the tiles like that. icon_smile.gif

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 10:03 AM

QUOTE(Yoshimi @ Jan 30 2012, 12:36 AM) View Post

Um, didn't Robin make this flowers "by hand"? I'm pretty sure he did. Anyways, the map is nice layout wise but these brown spots on the trees look wrong. Good work none the less, still.


Um, I did those flowers by hand. They're released in my tile package. dunno why Jared said he made them :s

Edit: Looks like you slightly edited them.

Edited by Gonken, 30 January 2012 - 10:05 AM.


#2261 Sheik

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 02:48 PM

QUOTE(Gonken @ Jan 30 2012, 04:03 PM) View Post

Um, I did those flowers by hand. They're released in my tile package. dunno why Jared said he made them :s

Edit: Looks like you slightly edited them.

Huh. I always thought Robin made them. I'm pretty sure they were in the new THP stuff after it changed from DoR to custom before changing from Zelda to original. Well whatever.

#2262 Supindahood

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 03:43 PM

Robin made some other for himself, those Jared shown are made by only me icon_smile.gif

#2263 Jared

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 03:49 PM

QUOTE(Shane @ Jan 30 2012, 03:16 AM) View Post

Maybe he added them into his quest by remaking them by hand? I a bit confused myself. icon_razz.gif

Anyways, Jared it looks great! Like the well(?) in the graveyard. :O



QUOTE(Gonken @ Jan 30 2012, 10:03 AM) View Post

Um, I did those flowers by hand. They're released in my tile package. dunno why Jared said he made them :s

Edit: Looks like you slightly edited them.

Yes, that's what I did. Since I couldn't rip them correctly, I did them pixel by pixel. Sorry for not explaining it correctly!
And thanks, Shane! But no, it's not a well. icon_wink.gif

And thanks, Rudolph! icon_biggrin.gif

Anything you guys would change?

#2264 Nightmeres

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 04:29 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Jan 29 2012, 01:43 PM) View Post

I like the one with grass! Looks much better. icon_smile.gif


Ok i got rid of some of the "Dimonds" and I also added a few windows.

how does it look.

#2265 Jared

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 04:31 PM

Looking better and better, Nightmeres! I would change the two identical diamonds on the right, however.


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