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#2131 Ventus

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 07:10 PM

Okay going to try my hand at this.

QUOTE(Jared @ Jan 16 2012, 05:31 PM) View Post

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Okay Jared, Your Screen looks perfect except the water is missing, I know you cant do anything yet with out the MC water tiles. So for that it looks pretty good.

QUOTE(Shane @ Jan 17 2012, 04:42 AM) View Post

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Looks good, but something about the upper right hand part of the screen...hm...Looks a little emtpy, now I really don't what you could put up there. but it looks empty. But it does look great though and I'm loving the Sub screen icon_wink.gif Good job.

QUOTE(Yoshidude @ Jan 17 2012, 02:34 PM) View Post

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Looks great, But I think it could use some bush's on the left side of the house. its just the left side of the house looks a little empty, thats just me though.

Edited by Ventus, 17 January 2012 - 08:13 PM.


#2132 Moon

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 08:46 PM

I tried making a LA styled screen and failed, here is the result.

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#2133 Jared

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 09:11 PM

Why did you fail? I like it.

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 10:52 PM

QUOTE(Yoshidude @ Jan 17 2012, 07:46 PM) View Post
I tried making a LA styled screen and failed, here is the result.

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I don't see where the fail is at! :o I'd say this looks pretty good to me.

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 10:56 PM

I always love autumn screens, and this one is well detailed. I'd actually love to play something like this...

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 11:12 PM

I also like the screen, yoshidude, but I think there is way too much transition between the two kinds of grass. Also, tile paths are not ramdom. Otherwise it's good icon_smile.gif

#2137 Shane

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 11:18 PM


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QUOTE(Yoshidude @ Jan 18 2012, 01:35 AM) View Post

About the stone path tiles, I actually recall them being used in a few places in LA, although I don't have the best memory.


They were featured exclusively for Tail Cave's entrance, I don't blame you for not remembering. Nice autumn screen by the way.



#2138 Neppy

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Posted 18 January 2012 - 12:02 AM

Enjoyable screen Shane! Looks very good compared to your first version of your screen. Good stuff.

#2139 Ventus

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Posted 18 January 2012 - 12:33 AM

QUOTE(Yoshidude @ Jan 17 2012, 07:46 PM) View Post

I tried making a LA styled screen and failed, here is the result.

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I really do not see a fail here. what I see is a nice generic Gameboy Screen, Good job.

QUOTE(Shane @ Jan 17 2012, 10:18 PM) View Post

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And ah that looks better icon_smile.gif. it just looked a little bare up there in the upper right, but it looks perfect!.
also the sub-screen in my opinion looks a lot better with that color.

#2140 Neppy

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Posted 18 January 2012 - 12:52 AM

QUOTE(Ventus @ Jan 17 2012, 11:33 PM) View Post
And ah that looks better icon_smile.gif. it just looked a little bare up there in the upper right, but it looks perfect!.
also the sub-screen in my opinion looks a lot better with that color.
I would have to agree with you on the subscreen color. icon_biggrin.gif

#2141 Jay

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Posted 18 January 2012 - 05:54 AM

Out of curiosity just seeing how I handle a screen of one of nintendo's best maps !

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#2142 Shane

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Posted 18 January 2012 - 06:08 AM

QUOTE(Jay @ Jan 18 2012, 08:24 PM) View Post

Out of curiosity just seeing how I handle a screen of one of nintendo's best maps !

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What's with the green rock? Also there were two sing posts? I thought one lead to a sing and the other to a blue rupee according to my copy of OoT...

Shape is good I guess.

Edited by Shane, 18 January 2012 - 06:08 AM.


#2143 Jay

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Posted 18 January 2012 - 06:13 AM

You're actually correct there, I could 8 bit the rock to make it brown? Otherwise this is the fix up :


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#2144 Neppy

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Posted 18 January 2012 - 06:31 AM

Looking good Jay! Especially with the corrections made. icon_biggrin.gif

#2145 Ventus

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Posted 18 January 2012 - 09:23 PM

QUOTE(Jay @ Jan 18 2012, 05:13 AM) View Post

You're actually correct there, I could 8 bit the rock to make it brown? Otherwise this is the fix up :
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Looks great Jay, really looks like the area In OoT, Good job!.


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