The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
#2071
Posted 11 January 2012 - 06:01 AM
#2072
Posted 11 January 2012 - 06:16 AM
#2073
Posted 11 January 2012 - 02:07 PM


Generic stuff and whatnot. I'm also terrible at dungeon design. But at least I'm doing something. Also I don't have a custom subscreen because I don't like using 2.5, so yeah, don't even start with that nonsense.
#2074
Posted 11 January 2012 - 02:58 PM
#2075
Posted 11 January 2012 - 03:05 PM
#2076
Posted 11 January 2012 - 03:10 PM
Edit: And the result:

I kind of like it. Makes it really feel like night, and helps set the mood better with Midna's Desperation playing in the background too.

And have an extra dungeon screen because I'm awful at them and need help.
#2078
Posted 11 January 2012 - 03:32 PM
- The stairs (On the left) are in the wrong CSet
- You did layer the red edges correctly
- There's grass on the other building's bottom?
- The bushes look wrong
- The Kokiri's Emerald emblem just looks...wrong.
- The palette is horrific
- The overhand needs openings, with the ".:" and others, if you know what I'm talking about.
Good luck!
#2079
Posted 11 January 2012 - 03:36 PM
- The overhand needs openings, with the ".:" and others, if you know what I'm talking about.
Good luck!
Thanks ! I don't know what you meant just there, as for palettes the basic PTUX has few options for overworld and I hate them all, I am horrible with palettes do don't know how to help that :/ I will re attempt ! But as for palettes, anywhere I can get custom palettes that are much better for pure?
#2080
Posted 11 January 2012 - 03:43 PM
#2081
Posted 11 January 2012 - 03:47 PM
#2082
Posted 11 January 2012 - 03:48 PM
#2083
Posted 11 January 2012 - 03:55 PM
I just took a look at it, and I do not think that I like the pure remembrance much at all, in terms of my MC set I have many of the overworld tiles needed for a quest, I still need dungeon ones, most enemies, most dungeon tiles etc. it's a long journey before being complete ! Especially since I've been alone on it
#2084
Posted 11 January 2012 - 04:03 PM
Edit: And the result:

I kind of like it. Makes it really feel like night, and helps set the mood better with Midna's Desperation playing in the background too.

And have an extra dungeon screen because I'm awful at them and need help.
I'm curious how I do with pure, here are two screens of the same, one with the transparency that goes above forests, one without, I am open and ask for all criticism to improve it?


#2085
Posted 11 January 2012 - 07:52 PM
Here is a screen test of the deepwoods one (This screen speaks more to the tiles I ripped and colored than the design, though I hope the design you find good!) Note: It took a while to get dungeon Mis. recolored to fit into all 3 dungeon sets I ripped in !

Edit: For some reason it did not show the upper tiles from the chest, so this screen does.

Edited by Jay, 11 January 2012 - 07:53 PM.
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