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#1966 Jay

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 05:25 PM

I figured that would be the general thought, I'll fix it up. thanks icon_smile.gif

#1967 Supindahood

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:50 PM

QUOTE(Jay @ Jan 4 2012, 04:18 PM) View Post

Wicked screen Gonken, Seems you're better at setting up a MC like set than me by far !
Another Screen test.

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Thanks icon_wink.gif and you seem to set it up with a few different tiles and palettes icon_smile.gif


Here is the updated one, i took the time to draw some snow on it and i hope it turned out good:
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Thanks for the replies above!

Edited by Gonken, 04 January 2012 - 06:52 PM.


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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:53 PM

QUOTE(Gonken @ Jan 4 2012, 04:50 PM) View Post

Thanks icon_wink.gif and you seem to set it up with a few different tiles and palettes icon_smile.gif


Thanks as well, new one looks even better !
I still need lots, like water grass ripples, most items, chests, dungeon misc. Locked doors and shutters for all dungeon doors, lots of enemy edits, I'm hard at it but the task seems almost out of my league!

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 08:00 PM

QUOTE(Jay @ Jan 4 2012, 06:53 PM) View Post

Thanks as well, new one looks even better !
I still need lots, like water grass ripples, most items, chests, dungeon misc. Locked doors and shutters for all dungeon doors, lots of enemy edits, I'm hard at it but the task seems almost out of my league!


Thanks, and yeah I also need to fix a lot of stuff before my set is complete icon_smile.gif

#1970 Orithan

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 08:37 PM

For TLKDX:

Before:

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And After:
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Yeah, this was a while ago, but it's the entrance to Level 2 netherless.

Any comments?



#1971 Professor Bedwetter

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 08:52 PM

They are rather square, I guess it's okay for the entrance room, though :/

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 09:15 PM

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#1973 Sephiroth

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 10:04 PM





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Posted 04 January 2012 - 10:12 PM

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That looks incredibly empty.

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 10:16 PM

QUOTE(Alison @ Jan 4 2012, 07:12 PM) View Post

That looks incredibly empty.



Agreeing with Alison. I like your little floor designs, I like them quite a bit, but that doesn't really cut it for detail. Might I suggest some pots?

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 10:19 PM

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Ditto Alison, and that the floor? on top the walls doesn't look good. The chest is prehaps the only thing going for this screen, it's an epic chest.



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Posted 04 January 2012 - 10:38 PM

In TMC, the floor graphics was also used as the ceilings as well, usually in a different CSet, and I'm mirroring that effect here. There are pots in the room, but I slashed them before taking the screenshot. The pots are on the bottom of the screen, one on each side of each doorway.

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 10:40 PM

QUOTE(Sephiroth @ Jan 4 2012, 07:38 PM) View Post

In TMC, the floor graphics was also used as the ceilings as well, usually in a different CSet, and I'm mirroring that effect here. There are pots in the room, but I slashed them before taking the screenshot. The pots are on the bottom of the screen, one on each side of each doorway.



Well the pots definitely should leave debris. Maybe put some pots lining the left and right lower middle walls

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 10:43 PM

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What's happened in this castle... ?

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 10:51 PM

QUOTE(Hubydweyer @ Jan 4 2012, 09:40 PM) View Post

Well the pots definitely should leave debris. Maybe put some pots lining the left and right lower middle walls


I would actually love to have them leave some sort of debris, but due to the way I'm using the pots, (Hint: They'll also be part of some puzzles), I cannot do such a thing, because they can be pushable, and thus wouldn't leave debris unless slashed, ... and it'd look funny to have pot debris left behind when you push the pot across the screen. icon_shrug.gif


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