
The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
#1951
Posted 03 January 2012 - 09:42 PM
#1953
Posted 04 January 2012 - 03:23 AM
First three screens of Shrine of the Woods
#1954
Posted 04 January 2012 - 03:54 AM
#1955
Posted 04 January 2012 - 04:26 AM
#1956
Posted 04 January 2012 - 05:28 AM
#1957
Posted 04 January 2012 - 01:43 PM
I dont post any screens in a while, so here's one of Lost Woods;
#1958
Posted 04 January 2012 - 01:53 PM
If it's not supposed to be tall grass like I said, I would use the tiles with tree trunks instead.
And are those two pale yellow things ghosts or skeletons? The tile design looks nice for Classic, but I don't know why you would put one in the top-right corner like that, even if Link was supposed to walk up to "talk" to it.
There is a certain stigma in screen designing about having "open corners", but that would only be an issue if the tile is supposed to be a walkable pile of bones on the ground.
I like your mushroom tiles, by the way.
Edit: One problem I just noticed: Halfway down the right side of the screen you used the wrong tile for the top right of the tree. Looks like your mouse moved slightly too far to the right when you were laying down the tile for the top left of the tree.
Edited by Lightwulf, 04 January 2012 - 01:58 PM.
#1959
Posted 04 January 2012 - 02:21 PM
I like the walls now, and the pallet is fine, but there should be much more trees especialy on the last screen.
I dont post any screens in a while, so here's one of Lost Woods;

This is a superior classic designed shot. The trees are quite fine, as I see them from the perspective of being tall tree/bush.
#1960
Posted 04 January 2012 - 02:44 PM

Screen from the winter area of my quest.
Thoughts?
Edited by Gonken, 04 January 2012 - 02:48 PM.
#1961
Posted 04 January 2012 - 03:20 PM
Lightwulf, that's not a skeleton, that's some sort of slightly taller plant o.o
Also, you can't walk on the tree, I mean, It's "sort of" a canopy. I think it looks cool like that.
Thank you both, anyways
#1963
Posted 04 January 2012 - 04:29 PM
#1965
Posted 04 January 2012 - 05:24 PM
Jay your screen looks really nice too, though the 2 water tiles just above the bridge don't fit, especially the little corner of land.
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