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#181 Jared

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Posted 27 April 2011 - 07:02 PM

It was a script that messed up my tiles. But I got it figured out now. Epona is almost done! Just gotta fix the ocarina from disappearing and get the Epona tiles to look right icon_smile.gif

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Posted 27 April 2011 - 10:38 PM

Another Screenshot from Selhera Forest (NOTE YOU WILL NOT HAVE THE SWORD AT THIS POINT IN THE GAME)
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Edited by Yoshidude, 27 April 2011 - 10:39 PM.


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Posted 27 April 2011 - 10:54 PM

I would suggest moving the light area northwest of Link so that it isn't cut off.

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Posted 28 April 2011 - 12:39 PM

QUOTE(Isdrakthül @ Apr 27 2011, 11:54 PM) View Post

I would suggest moving the light area northwest of Link so that it isn't cut off.
Oh, thanks I didn't notice that icon_smile.gif


Also, I'm thinking of making this Forest lead to Hyrule Field

Also also, everyone put this in your signature if you support Shadows of Hyrule
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Edited by Yoshidude, 28 April 2011 - 12:39 PM.


#185 Jared

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Posted 28 April 2011 - 04:06 PM

Very good Yoshidude!
But a patch of dirt would make it look nice icon_smile.gif

http://img195.images...3/zelda004z.png

What do you guys think of my start of Hyrule Field?
It's fun making it icon_biggrin.gif

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Posted 28 April 2011 - 04:09 PM

QUOTE(Lynker @ Apr 28 2011, 03:06 PM) View Post

http://img195.images...3/zelda004z.png

What do you guys think of my start of Hyrule Field?
It's fun making it icon_biggrin.gif

It looks a bit empty. A screen of almost all grass combos isn't very entertaining. Try adding some dirt patches and gaps in the grass as well as maybe some rocks and trees.

Edit: Also, I'm pretty sure you used the mountain to water tiles wrong on the right side of that river.

Edited by Pokemonmaster64, 28 April 2011 - 04:14 PM.


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Posted 28 April 2011 - 04:10 PM

I'm really liking that Lynker. My suggestion is, add a few more flower tiles here and there, they are a good thing. icon_lol.gif Perhaps add another big pine tree or two somewhere within that map area.

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Posted 28 April 2011 - 04:12 PM

Pokemonmaster, it's a field of grass, pretty much. But dirt will help, thanks. icon_smile.gif
Thank you Angeal! I was going to add more flowers icon_lol.gif

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Posted 29 April 2011 - 01:36 AM

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Made this shot way back any thoughts?

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Posted 29 April 2011 - 01:45 AM

Do you want the truth Midnight_King? Because honestly, I don't know if you can handle the truth. Well... ok, so I suppose you probably can. icon_razz.gif I really really like that screen. It's got a different feel to it, but it's truly great. I'm a GB Tileset fan, so you have got me majorly interested. icon_smile.gif

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Posted 29 April 2011 - 03:12 AM

Wow, a new Screenshot Thread, fully dedicated to critique? Nice going. ^^ I think it's hilarious the old thread ended at Page 666, though. Coincidence, or not? icon_lol.gif

Anyway let's see here... I'll do two tonight.

QUOTE(Yoshidude)

Another Screenshot from Selhera Forest (NOTE YOU WILL NOT HAVE THE SWORD AT THIS POINT IN THE GAME)

Solid work. icon_smile.gif Shows you know the basics of using PTUX efficiently. My suggestions would be to add more color to this shot, if possible (different color trees, maybe some flowers, etc.). Even under the dim forest canopy, different colors really do show up and change the atmosphere of the game.

QUOTE(Midnight_King @ Apr 28 2011, 11:36 PM) View Post

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Made this shot way back any thoughts?

My GOD, that is good. icon_biggrin.gif The shape of the screen is varied, the entire thing catches the eye and not just one part of it, it's chalk full of detail... What more could you ask for? icon_love.gif This is one reason I love the GB set; the black space is actually beneficial a lot of the time, whereas in other tilesets it would be a hinderance. NICE work.

Edited by Schwa, 29 April 2011 - 03:14 AM.


#192 Moon

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Posted 29 April 2011 - 07:21 AM

QUOTE(Schwa @ Apr 29 2011, 04:12 AM) View Post

Anyway let's see here... I'll do two tonight.
Solid work. Shows you know the basics of using PTUX efficiently. My suggestions would be to add more color to this shot, if possible (different color trees, maybe some flowers, etc.). Even under the dim forest canopy, different colors really do show up and change the atmosphere of the game.

Wow, Thanks! but i'm not actually using PTUX, i'm using Pure Tileset Update V2.2 (alot less tiles) I will try to add more colors, (Orange trees, pink flowers ETC)

Edited by Yoshidude, 29 April 2011 - 07:23 AM.


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Posted 29 April 2011 - 06:18 PM

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What do you guys think? I love both screens sooo much icon_biggrin.gif

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Posted 29 April 2011 - 07:42 PM

The second one is great, but the first could use more detail

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Posted 29 April 2011 - 08:49 PM

well, i thought the opposite, i really like the first screen, but i dont see nothing special in the second one.


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