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The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread

Started by Mitchfork , Apr 16 2011 09:35 PM

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#1786 Chakaa

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 09:54 PM

http://img443.images...074/farona2.png

A map of the starting area of my quest. As you can guess by the name, it's a town in Faron Woods. The map is about half done, and ignore the mountains on the right side, they're not done yet.

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 09:57 PM

QUOTE(FefeRawft @ Dec 20 2011, 07:54 PM) View Post

http://img443.images...074/farona2.png

A map of the starting area of my quest. As you can guess by the name, it's a town in Faron Woods. The map is about half done, and ignore the mountains on the right side, they're not done yet.


Oooh very nice. This map is beautifully unified and flows like a true GB region. I have no complaints.

#1788 Schwa

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 10:06 PM

QUOTE(FefeRawft @ Dec 20 2011, 06:54 PM) View Post

http://img443.images...074/farona2.png

Wow, this is glorious! icon_love.gif I have no complaints either.

I do have one point that's not a complaint, though. Have you tried using a little more colorfulness? The map is extremely green, and that's not bad, but I wonder if it would look nicer with a more lively color selection, such as red/pink/blue flowers here and there, or even the oddly placed grey rock in some corner (not pushable, just decoration)...

#1789 Jared

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 10:08 PM

Meh, might as well!

http://img543.images...1/zelda005l.png

And I already told Mark how good his was. icon_razz.gif

#1790 Tree

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 10:12 PM

Very nice Jared icon_smile.gif

It looks quite similar to older works from you. Is it a remake? Just curious icon_wink.gif

#1791 Jared

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 10:13 PM

Nope, it's not! What does it look like, if it looks like a remake? o.o

#1792 Orithan

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 10:28 PM

I can see that it's not complete yet, as there are incomplete screens towards the bottom left corner. There is also a tile error with one of the bushes in the lower right corner. Other than that, I see nothing wrong.

#1793 Jared

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 10:31 PM

QUOTE(Orin XD @ Dec 20 2011, 10:28 PM) View Post

I can see that it's not complete yet, as there are incomplete screens towards the bottom left corner. There is also a tile error with one of the bushes in the lower right corner. Other than that, I see nothing wrong.


Nope, it's extremely close though.
And I didn't see that! Forgot a layer for the top. icon_razz.gif
Thanks!

#1794 Russ

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 11:19 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Dec 20 2011, 07:08 PM) View Post

Meh, might as well!

http://img543.images...1/zelda005l.png

You have officially become Robin's spiritual successor. It looks so much like Hylian Phoenix did before Robin changed the graphics, then quit ZC. Keep up the good work, I'm excited to see where this leads.

#1795 Tree

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Posted 20 December 2011 - 11:42 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Dec 20 2011, 10:13 PM) View Post

Nope, it's not! What does it look like, if it looks like a remake? o.o

It reminds my of the first area from rocs remembrance. But if that wasn't the plan, well, maybe I'm just a loon icon_razz.gif

Still good either way icon_smile.gif

Edited by Keiichi123, 20 December 2011 - 11:43 PM.

#1796 Shane

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Posted 21 December 2011 - 12:54 AM

QUOTE(Jared @ Dec 21 2011, 12:38 PM) View Post

Meh, might as well!

http://img543.images...1/zelda005l.png

And I already told Mark how good his was. icon_razz.gif


OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! :'D This is beautiful. This turned out better then I expected! I'm looking forward to seeing more Jared! icon_biggrin.gif

(I'm still your beta tester. Right? icon_frown.gif)

Edited by Shane, 21 December 2011 - 12:55 AM.

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Posted 21 December 2011 - 02:47 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Dec 20 2011, 10:08 PM) View Post

Meh, might as well!

http://img543.images...1/zelda005l.png

And I already told Mark how good his was. icon_razz.gif


I'm not sure exactly what it is, but something about the grass colors look off to me. I think instead of just being different shades of the same green, they are different places on the color wheel. Now normally I think this is good, but it may have gone a little too much so? As in the accent green has too much blue, or something. I can't pinpoint what feels wrong. Other then that, good map.

FefeRawft, that map is exceptional! It flows like an actual Gameboy Zelda game would, but set up to be more pleasing to the eyes. Great work!

Continuing in the same idea as my last shot. Sorry about the lack of subscreen and the lack of Link, I'm just trying to get a feel for Zelda Classic again.
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#1798 Jared

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Posted 21 December 2011 - 05:37 PM

QUOTE(Shane @ Dec 21 2011, 12:54 AM) View Post

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! :'D This is beautiful. This turned out better then I expected! I'm looking forward to seeing more Jared! icon_biggrin.gif

(I'm still your beta tester. Right? icon_frown.gif)


Of course you are! icon_love.gif

And HK, I like my palette. It just gives off a nice look, in my opinion. I really like that screen, with your palette also. It gives off a dark look. Wonderful job!

Edited by Jared, 21 December 2011 - 05:37 PM.

#1799 Tree

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Posted 21 December 2011 - 05:59 PM

This is what I've been working on for a few months. It isn't much, but I've been adding graphics and palettes for the most part.

http://zc.celestialr.../234_screen.png

I think it's pretty.

What do you guys think?

P.S. the 3 screens in the top-right corner are just test screens. Ignore them.

If that link doesn't work, try this.

http://zc.celestialr...een.php?num=234

Edited by Keiichi123, 21 December 2011 - 07:55 PM.

#1800 blue_knight

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Posted 21 December 2011 - 06:26 PM

I like the screens, except for the browns on the tops of the trees.
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