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[Jay]

It is not intended to be a remake or anything of the sort, the city in the sky is just inspired by it. I could use MC house but I would only be okay with using the more temple like houses that are generally square or rectangular. Great screen !

[Jared]

Screen for new idea I have

Nice work! I think the barn does indeed clash, but I think it's fine. I think the road could use a little detail as well.

GB set. Critique and comments?

I like it! Not much to critique, honestly Orin

[Jay]

Update:

[Jared]

If you're intending to make it look like Skyloft, then I would remove most of the cloud. In fact, the mountains are floating, not just surrounded. Editing is the key!

[Jay]

I guess if that will look better lol, but inspired by skyloft doesn't have to look like it

More changes, less clouds, more dirt detail, mountains edited to fit into sky.

[Shane]

I guess if that will look better lol, but inspired by skyloft doesn't have to look like it

More changes, less clouds, more dirt detail, mountains edited to fit into sky.

Why is there two oddly green coloured grass to dirt border tiles? O_o

I'd add a MC background below the clouds.

Edited by Shane, 18 December 2011 - 12:27 AM.

[Jay]

Better?

[Shane]

I'd prefer a different background (one that is faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar up specifically pointing at MC), at least one that isn't used oftenly. Pretty good DoR screen for a new person (first time using it I believe). Most people tend to add lots of detail (lots that clutter your screen that is) on the screens, glad you didn't do the same mistake.

Edited by Shane, 18 December 2011 - 01:12 AM.

[Jared]

I liked the old better. It seems like it's just on a mountaintop, now.

[Jay]

Not new been around for many years lol, but yeah I'm thinking I'll stick with the sky background for the upper area.

[Shane]

Not new been around for many years lol, but yeah I'm thinking I'll stick with the sky background for the upper area.

As I said, the MC (cloud top and palace of winds to be more specific) backgrounds would be perfect or at least, better then a pure blue background.

Edited by Shane, 18 December 2011 - 01:15 AM.

[Jay]

Ioh I see, will do !

[Chakaa]

Subscreen I recently finished.
Everything is final except the map, which is just a placeholder for custom maps for each area. The treasures are handled using the extra counters, custom items, and string control codes.

[Jared]

I already told you how amazing it was, but I meant to put it in the subscreen shots thread.

[Chakaa]

Subscreen thread? I didn't know there was one o_O