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#1 Neppy

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 02:35 AM

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This is a filler screen.
 
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Just what is going on here?
 
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So much to do!


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#2 Eddy

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 10:31 AM

AnthusI don't vote for filler screens. Pretty nice shot though, the palette is pretty interesting and I like the abandoned mine setting you have here. No idea what's up with the purple sand though.

 

Shoshon - Took a little while for me to realise this is a Christmas shot. Looks nice though, and I just imagine those gifts over to the left side are moving along the conveyor towards the bottomless pits of hell. Nice work overall.

 

Joelmacool - This looks really good. I love the variety of tiles throughout the screen and the different tree tiles are a nice touch. Overall design is very nice.

 

I voted for Joel this week.


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#3 Architect Abdiel

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 11:10 AM

Yeah. It's gonna be level 7. A full on dark toy factory themed dungeon. Thanks. I was hoping my janky custom tiles would be okay.

Anthus:
I love the shape. Though I am a bit confused with the ground tiles.

Shoshon:
Need to edit those conveyor belts to be more conveyory. Also, don't forget to make those gifts on the belts disappearing FFCs, you ditz.

Joel:
Excellent shot. Best one this week. Nice structure.
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#4 trudatman

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 12:02 PM

none.
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#5 Joelmacool

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 01:47 PM

none.

Very good critique.


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#6 Architect Abdiel

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 02:13 PM

Very good critique.


Your octoroks should be purple and your water orange.
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#7 trudatman

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 02:18 PM

screenshot critique is a different thread, but, generally, I vote for pretty ones and/or ones I want to play. thank you.
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#8 Nathaniel

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 02:28 PM

I am the first vote for Anthus.  Love the minecart tracks incorporated into classic style graphics, along with the floor variation.


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#9 Haylee

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 02:35 PM

Leave it to Anthus to make a very appealing Classic shot. Everyone's shots were good this week though. IDK if Shoshon's spritework was intentional or not, if it was, it certainly helps to have a consistent artstyle like you're doing, and Joel's is a nice EZGBZ shot as per usual with his shots, I can't really say much that hasn't already been said.

 

screenshot critique is a different thread, but, generally, I vote for pretty ones and/or ones I want to play. thank you.

Looks like someone could use some edumacation.

 

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#10 Evan20000

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 03:01 PM

Your smug anime-fu is weak af, Eins.

 

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I really like Shoshon's though. Some of the sprites look a little derp, but not enough to ruin it and it conveys what it's trying to perfectly.


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#11 Architect Abdiel

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 03:06 PM

Thanks Eins. It's somewhat intentional I believe. I do try to make them all in a similar way.

#12 Anthus

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 03:29 PM

Anthus:
I love the shape. Though I am a bit confused with the ground tiles.

 

The different colored "sand" is supposed to be like ore-right sands or something. This is a mine of sorts. I for some reason submitted the version without the vertical brisk wall lines though. >.> I like yours though. At first, I was thinking of some sort of Christmas themed area.

 

 

I am the first vote for Anthus.  Love the minecart tracks incorporated into classic style graphics, along with the floor variation.

 

Thanks. :)

 

Leave it to Anthus to make a very appealing Classic shot. Everyone's shots were good this week though. IDK if Shoshon's spritework was intentional or not, if it was, it certainly helps to have a consistent artstyle like you're doing, and Joel's is a nice EZGBZ shot as per usual with his shots, I can't really say much that hasn't already been said.

 

I probably would have voted for Joel's, honestly. I've been playing the Oracle games lately, and it is a really solid shot.



#13 Architect Abdiel

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 03:48 PM

Yeah Anthus. It started as one Christmas themed room, but then I had the idea of a somewhat Christmas themed Toy Factory. I wanted to do this shot last week, but Christmas had me busy.
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#14 Matthew

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 09:19 PM

Anthus: Awesome screen! I love it when people use classic well, and this is definitely an intriguing screen.

 

Shoshon: I voted here. Another classic screen, and there's definitely an interesting story being told here. I wonder what's going on?

 

Joelmacool: This is a competent screen. It has a decent palette and structure, but to be honest, there's not much interesting or compelling going on here.



#15 Architect Abdiel

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Posted 01 January 2018 - 10:00 PM

Thanks. And yeah, this is my favorite story arc in the quest.



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