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[Neppy]

Furion

Transitioning Environment

Nolornbon

In the world of Evervale, Link must brave part of the Slime Ruins in order to get the Wooden Sword. However, a Mirror Wizzrobe is nearby and will shoot at and kill anybody who tries to open the blue chest and claim the wooden sword.

Lightwulf

Whoever use to live here will be pretty upset at the mess the Vires made of their master bedroom.

Ventus

Oh look a generic screen-shot.

Yoshidude

Link wonders how he will get the treasure chest.

Jared

Have I risen from the ashes? Maybe so!

[Dawnlight]

I voted for Furion although I do admit that we've seen too much of that kind of graphics from you.

[Jared]

Furion: Without a doubt, beautiful. You've captured the flow perfectly, transitioning. 10/10

Nolornbon: Very good. I love the colors, and theme. Kind of inspires me, actually! For a dungeon! 9/10

Lightwulf: Smallness aside, very nice. However, Link doesn't blend in. But it's SoTW, not Link of The Week A lot of work has been put into this. 9/10

Ventus: I'll be honest. This is your worst screen. Ever. I KNOW you can do better. The tiles are used wrong, and the grass is repetitive. The layout is okay, though. 4/10

Yoshidude: It's okay. It's boring, however. Very monotone, nothing that makes it stand out. Not saying that every screen needs to stand out, but it helps make them look better. 6/10

By the way, Yoshidude. You need to stop asking for critique and advice if you're not going to change and fix your screens with them. Everyone is getting annoyed with this. So straighten up or STOP asking for help.

Me: I can say I honestly put a lot of work into this, and ripping/recoloring the small tree tiles. I think it turned out amazingly. I'm proud of myself. Plus, I can't take all the credit. Thanks a lot for helping, Shane 10000/10

Pretty good week!
Ended up voting for myself Nolornbon. He just gave me inspiration, and I can't thank him enough

[Moon]

Yoshidude:
By the way, Yoshidude. You need to stop asking for critique and advice if you're not going to change and fix your screens with them. Everyone is getting annoyed with this. So straighten up or STOP asking for help.

I tried sending in the fixed version of this screen, but I guess it didn't go through


Furion: 6/10
Fancy graphics, but nothing too special about the screen.

Nolornbon: 8/10
This screen is actually pretty creative, I like it


Lightwulf: 7/10
Another creative screen, but it has some bad style clash

Ventus: 5/10
Yes, It is a generic screen-shot

Yoshidude: -/10

Jared: 7/10
Its a good screen, but nothing to special.

Edited by Yoshidude, 19 November 2011 - 11:51 PM.

[Shane]

Voted for Jared, watching him make that screen was one of the most best ZC moments anyone could've shared.

[Tree]

I voted for Jared.

Wonderful Dor shot and great use of the mountains. I don't know how, but it reminds me of playing Minecraft. Which makes it look great by the way. The small trees really don't fit with the graphics AT ALL.

But it's score from me is a 8.5/10. Good job brothah

[Moon]

Hmm, if both of you voted for Jared, why does he only have one vote?

[Jared]

Voted for Jared, watching him make that screen was one of the most best ZC moments anyone could've shared.

I am so in love with you Shane

[Shane]

Hmm, if both of you voted for Jared, why does he only have one vote?

I forgot to vote before I left.

[Neppy]

I tried sending in the fixed version of this screen, but I guess it didn't go through

Actually, this is the second version of this screen you sent in. So, yeah...
Original - Yoshidude

[Shane]

I am so in love with you Shane

You're welcome Jared. Was meant to merge with my last post, yeah.

Edited by Shane, 20 November 2011 - 12:12 AM.

[Neppy]

I voted for Nolornbon this week. Wonderful shot this week. I'm a huge sucker for GB shots.

[Moon]

Actually, this is the second version of this screen you sent in. So, yeah...
Original - Yoshidude

But I meant to send in this version.

[Dawnlight]

Calm down Yoshidude. Regardless of whether your second shot was presented, that does not change my vote.

Geez, why are people so desperate to win SotW while in reality it's not a big deal?

[Adem]

I voted for Nolornbon. Werk.

Furion: There really isn't anything wrong with it, but it's not really anything special if put with some of your previous submissions over the past few months. I mean, it's a great show. It's just not...unique.

Lightwulf: It's not that bad, but it's not that great either. I think one of those three middles rows of the bed should go. You could get away with making the bed two pillows wide, but three is just kind of weird. It almost seems like it's there to fill up space...Now, good luck to the player making it through that room alive.

Ventus: While the layout of the screen is fairly interesting, there are a lot of misused tiles, perspective issues, and the grass needs to be fixed. Also, that square stonewall thing looks rather unnatural. But snaps to you for giving Origins III a try. I know from a experience how difficult it can be to use.


Yoshidude:

But I meant to send in this version.

All due respect, I don't really see many differences at all. It's like playing one of those games where two pictures are side by side and you have to find all of the subtle differences. It's just a friendly competition, buddy. Don't sweat things so much. The layout is decent, it just needs more pizazz.

Jared: The ciiiiiiircle of liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiife~! It moooves us aaaaa-a-aaaaaalllllllll!!

... *ehem*

I like it! However, if you're going to use those custom trees, I'd recommend finding something to replace the LttP trees, as it messes a lot with the perspective. I also recommend adding more light to them to make them fit in more. The screen itself could use a little bit more color, but that's just another thing on the list of my opinions.

Great week, guys!