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[The Satellite]

MrPow

Link: "I have a feeling that Heart Container Piece is not going to be so easy to get..."

(I'm new and trying to learn the editor. I accept and appreciate all forms of criticism about this screen so I can learn and improve)

 

Mitsukara

My hat of ZC know no limit. By popular request of Grayswandir.

 

Alestance

Spy's sappin' my scent trees.

 

Joelmacool

Let's cross the river, shall we?

[Sheik]

I voted for Alestance again. I would suggest, though, placing only one of the big scent seeds on the tree or making the collectible sprite for them smaller.

[Eddy]

MrPow - Pretty good start actually, I like the direction you're going with this screen. I'd probably try to fix up the mountains on the top-right since they look like they're kinda going into each other, which looks quite weird and causes some really bad perspective issues. The big tree on the top-left looks odd too, since it kinda looks like there's no base (even though I assume the forest brush would be the base of the tree). Other than that though, nice screen.

 

Mitsukara - D E A L   W I T H    I T

 

Alestance - Very nice screenshot. I really like how this modified BS tileset is coming along. Like Sheik said though, I'd probably suggest making those seeds smaller so that you can kinda see more of the tree. Either way, nice work.

 

Joelmacool - Another great shot. I like the design of this one, especially with the different types of trees and detail you have. I don't really have any complaints with this one, so good work!

 

I voted for Joelmacool this week.

[Matthew]

MrPow is brand new to the editor and he's already amazing. No joke, your screen is awesome. If I had to give a criticism, it would be to fix the perspective on the mountain to the top-right and to clear up some of the detail, because the screen looks somewhat busy.

Despite the praise for MrPow, I did vote for alestance. I just love the clean and simple style that's easy on the eyes.

Everyone did a good job though!

[Cukeman]

Mitsukara made me smile. Voted for Joelmacool's great design- it's very subtle, but there's a lot going on and none of it feels overcrowded, out of place, or too rectangular.

[Nathaniel]

MrPow - Very nicely made overworld screen.  Now you just need an Engineer attacking with a Gunslinger so you can say "Pow," but I am now digressing over the wrong game.

Mitsukara - Haters gonna hate.

Alestance - What a load of BS, and I mean that in a good way.

Joelmacool - It's an overworld screen.  It's made by Joel.  It's pretty cool.  Need I say more?

A mostly standard week of overworld screens, with the exception of Link and Zelda living in the limelight, for the less modest in us.  As for the vote, I went with MrPow in a close matchup.

[Titanium Justice]

Voting for MrPow this week. Looking good!

[David]

Very nice screens this week! In the end I voted for MrPow. There are few weird perspective errors with the mountains in the top right but overall it's an excellent screen and it's beautifully detailed. Great job!

[MrPow]

Null vote cuz I'm in this week.

Can anyone be more specific regarding the mountains in the top right corner of my screen? Is it that middle piece that extends down? Should I make them taller so you don't see the grass on top? Someone said they run into each other. I was trying to make them look more natural. Any suggestions?

Thanks for the advice and I appreciate all the comments so far.

[MrPow]

MrPow - Very nicely made overworld screen.  Now you just need an Engineer attacking with a Gunslinger so you can say "Pow," but I am now digressing over the wrong game

Oh man it's been so long! but I'm going to go with TF2?

[Saffith]

Can anyone be more specific regarding the mountains in the top right corner of my screen?

Apparently, no one's going to come back before this gets locked.
I'm not certain I'm seeing the same thing they're talking about, but I think it's that the bit sticking down is one tier high at the top of the screen and two tiers lower down with no clear transition. The bottom tier sticks out and sort of folds into the top one.

[MrPow]

Apparently, no one's going to come back before this gets locked. :PI'm not certain I'm seeing the same thing they're talking about, but I think it's that the bit sticking down is one tier high at the top of the screen and two tiers lower down with no clear transition. The bottom tier sticks out and sort of folds into the top one.

Ahh yes, I see it now.

[The Satellite]

With 53.06% of the vote, the winner of Screenshot of the Week 581 is MrPow!

 

 

Congratulations!

 

Voting totals:

- MrPow (26 votes [53.06%])

- Mitsukara (5 votes [10.20%])
- Alestance (13 votes [26.53%])
- Joelmacool (5 votes [10.20%])