Thanks a bunch for the feedback everyone . Main compliant seems to be the palette, but I doubt I'll change it much, as I am more or less going for that "oddly frosted cake in the bakery" look as SkyLizardGirl put it. However, looking at the shot again, I personally think it might help if I change the cliff's color a little bit. There's something about the color there that has been irking me anyway.
As for the pool of water, it would probably help if you could see the two fish jumping in it, but I was more focused on catching the red eyes in the shot rather then the fish so... the poor fish kinda got left out .
By the way, LinkFan212, the wooden sword, three hearts, wooden shield, and no 'B' item is all a little bit misleading. In reality I'm expecting Link to have more like five or six hearts, a magical shield, a bomb bag and a couple other 'B' items, along with being very close to a white sword upgrade.
And thanks a bunch Twilight_Knight for the compliment, I have been trying to improve my grass skills . As for the cramped look, hadn't really though about it, but on closer inspection, by the time an enemy was added to this screen, one would really notice just how cramped it is. However, it's not a combat area so I don't think it will cause any problems.
Now, for my own thoughts:
joelmacool12 - Whenever I see a well done screen in a classic style tileset, I always feel a little envious, as I don't feel like I could make screens like that myself, though if I tried, I might be able to get the hang of it. Either way, I like this screen, though the shallow to deep water transition looks a little odd to me. I'm curious, does that rock hidden behind the right hand tree serve any purpose?
bmc10011 - Nothing really catches my eye here, though it could certainly be part of a fun dungeon to play through. I might add that I personally don't have a problem with the orange walls and purple floor. To me, they give the dungeon a undesirable look, suitable for a prison (then again, people seem to think my palette is a little off so you might want to discard my opinion on that ).
Edited by Dwarlen, 03 March 2015 - 07:50 AM.