QUOTE(Dawnlight @ Jul 24 2011, 05:12 PM)

...Pabru...and William's screens are the only functional screens this week.
I beg to differ, mine is fully functional (as soon as I get a script to open a treasure chest from above.)
The large rock will simply be a large trap that moves in a pattern. Yup. Fully functional.Pabru: I really like this, I just can't bear to look at it very long - the colors strongly affect my eyes.
If you could tone it down, just the tiniest bit, I think I could handle it. I agree with Keiichi123 though,
you could stand to lose a bush or two. I think it would be a cool idea if you had to bomb that skeleton
to get to the keyhole.
Jared: I don't really have any comment, I'm not really into that graphical style, nice as it is.
King Harkinian: I've seen much better from you. Particularly your recent Screen Rebirth entry.
As others have said overlap your trees more and make the whole thing less squarish. It is almost as
if your screen was split down the middle.
William: I'm a fan of your redone classic work in general, but I'm not really into this.
Link doesn't stand out very well, and the trees aren't overlapping too well, or there are too many.
Yoshidude: It's nice. I wish one or two small things in your screen were brightly colored,
but no biggie. That transition of the grass going over the cliff looks a little strange.
Lightwulf: I love the fountain and NPCs, especially the twins. Fix some of the open corners,
and give us some walking tiles among the cobblestones. I'm digging it.
me: I'm sure you can tell that this was not designed as an entry for SotW. What I did was this:
I remade the entire Kokiri Forest map using Minish Cap graphics, and this is the only screen that I
have brought into ZC so far. I might enter the whole map in the Map of the Month contest, but I don't
think it's something that's going to be finished very soon. Nonetheless, I'm very proud of it.
Lithium: The transparent water is awesome. It could be more blue, but I know very well that
transparencies are unforgiving so I won't hold it against you. I like how the crab is pinching, and the
cool mushroom dude. The only thing I don't like is how close some of the grass blades are to the
grass borders.
Nice job this week everyone

BTW, does SotM exist anymore?
Edited by Cukeman, 25 July 2011 - 11:38 AM.