Screenshot of the Week 252
#1
Posted 20 April 2009 - 10:57 PM
Wild Wild West Pure Style - First Cameo Revealed
Shiek
Zoras Domain
Nuvo
Link R us
Tried my hand at some GB work...Heeeere, kitty, kitty, kittyyy! ~♪
#2
Posted 20 April 2009 - 11:59 PM
I would have voted fot Dawnlight, it's pretty.
Nuvos also looks good but I miss some trees.
Link R us' screen a little too plain, even if it's planned to be original Gameboy-style. Give us more detail !
#4
Posted 21 April 2009 - 01:51 AM
This is the true water screen! It has excellent layout, beautiful (shining?) building and real deep (transparent) flowing water!
There's a tiny mishap, though. The borders suggest that the water is very shallow, only the trees reveal that its deep. There shouldn't be border where the water falls and/or the north borders need transparent water on their south sides. Moreover, there shouldn't be a horizontal water over the trees. They have round ranch, so let the branch be out of water, but only the branch.
#5
Posted 21 April 2009 - 08:44 AM
Shiek all the way!
This is the true water screen! It has excellent layout, beautiful (shining?) building and real deep (transparent) flowing water!
There's a tiny mishap, though. The borders suggest that the water is very shallow, only the trees reveal that its deep. There shouldn't be border where the water falls and/or the north borders need transparent water on their south sides. Moreover, there shouldn't be a horizontal water over the trees. They have round ranch, so let the branch be out of water, but only the branch.
Thanks.
I found a million more mistakes like the unfitting trees (there are speific Zora-trees), unfitting detail (there are even corals) and the ones you named. However I was in a rush and I guess it's the first time for anyone to use transparent water with GB... Well. I will make something more responsible next week.
#6
Posted 21 April 2009 - 09:49 AM
Dawnlight: Great desert screen, I really like it.
Shiek: Great Zora Domain screen... But how you put the transparent water around is weird...
Nuvo: Don't like those overuse of sharp edges, makes it look bad designed.
Link R Us: Average GB, but it doesn't draw my attention so much.
#7
Posted 21 April 2009 - 03:30 PM
really clean zora domain, theres a bug on the tree of the corner.
#8
Posted 21 April 2009 - 07:54 PM
#9
Posted 21 April 2009 - 08:20 PM
Had I not entered, I'd have voted for Shiek. Very nice shot.
#10
Posted 23 April 2009 - 04:59 PM
#11
Posted 23 April 2009 - 05:10 PM
I think it's thoroughly average. No glaring flaws, but really nothing there that grabs me and pulls me into the shot either.
Shiek: 7/10
First of all, I love this concept. But I think it has some major perspective issues that prevent me from voting for it- for example, the water level at the cliff bases is extremely shallow, like a small puddle, but it extends halfway up the trees. It all left me very confused and disoriented looking at the shot.
Nuvo: 9/10
One of my favorite shots. I may be in the minority, but I think this shot is excellent. While I think some of the diagonal edges were too straight, the flow of the screen is unmatched and the palette works with the shadows phenomenally.
Link R us: 5/10
Very plain. Definitely not the worst GB screen I've seen, but there are some major improvements to be done. The ground detail is the first thing- you need to mix it up more than you have been. See some of drzchulo's or Relic's Newfirst shots for an idea of what I'm saying. You also need to work on more creative mountain usage, as the straight edges make the shot boring and give it a "I've seen it before" look.
#12
Posted 23 April 2009 - 05:46 PM
#13
Posted 23 April 2009 - 09:59 PM
The rest of the shots are all good in their own style, solid shots. Sheik is the obvious win in my book, though.
#14
Posted 23 April 2009 - 11:35 PM
#15
Posted 24 April 2009 - 12:23 AM
Shiek 10/10 you just gave me an Idea for zoras domain and the shot looks so like a domain!
Nuvo 9.5/10 what a good shot to bad I can't vote for 2
Link R us 9/10 truly a OoS(ish) shot 1 question will the cat come down
So Shiek grabs my vote... well done all of yous
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