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[CastChaos]

Voted for /M/.
The palette is very interesting and the perspective is very exciting... I love when lower things are actually smaller.

TriMaster: Nice gameplay screen.

The Satellite: Super layout, plus I like snow.

Evan the great: Nice lights, nice palette, what an MC feeling... ...in this otherwise general screen.

Ebola Zaire: At first, I thought this was an ordinary screen, but then I realized the great mountains. I like the entrance and stairs tiles, too... plus I love that big tree on the left.

[Twilight Knight]

Trimaster001: Nice screen. Looks detailed and sweet.
The Satellite: Really empty, you should put some walkable rocks&stuff in the snow.
Evan the Great: Lovely palette, but those walls look..., strange and the light beams as well.
Ebola Zaire: Great, but the mountain tiles have a really soft brown. Like there made of hot chocolate instead of rocks.
/M/: Nice mountains. The palette could be better, to light. You also need a link, unless you want the classic one. I'm still not sure the palette has to be that bright(or misty).

Vote: Trimaster!

[Titanium Justice]

Ebola got my vote i love those canyons in that shot!

[Bix]

Voted TS. This has nothing to do with friendship, neither.

Evan's, imo, is somewhat normal. Good form, but, the palette seems kinda gloomy to me. /M/'s is, well, incomplete... TriMaster... nice shot, nice shot, definitely, but I typically don't vote for dungeon shots and Ebola... Not caring much for those mountains...

[Ben]

I voted Evan. Nothing wrong with adding a little bloom to the palette. It makes for a more ethereal atmosphere.

[Shoelace]

I voted for Trimaster001. The screen was awesome with design as the rooms around it fit. As a screen it makes me want to play that game. Very good job.

You can quote me that Trimaster001 is the next Mr. Z.

[Octorockoncrack]

I dont even think i can vote...I love 'em all!

[Deathbringer]

I like the way TriMaster001 uses Pure. Therefore, that's where my vote goes.

[The Satellite]

Evan's ... palette seems kinda gloomy to me.

That's... what makes it good.

At second look, TriMaster's shot looks better and better. Nice job.

[Dawnlight]

You can quote me that Trimaster001 is the next Mr. Z.

Wow you're making me blush. You don't have to go that far. I still have lots to learn.

[NoeL]

Tri: Still don't like the lights, but it's the best shot this week *votes*

TS: Interesting... not terribly appealing to me though. Not a fan of the hodgepodge of graphics.

Ev: I like it! Surprised this doesn't have more votes

EZ: ... why did you take a shade out of those mountains? They look bad now, and clash HORRIBLY with the black-outlined Pure tiles.

/M/: I don't see the logic in submitting WIPs ... why not finish it THEN submit?

[Mitchfork]

EZ: ... why did you take a shade out of those mountains? They look bad now, and clash HORRIBLY with the black-outlined Pure tiles.

Already been fixed.. sort of. I didn't edit the palette before submitting (curse my laziness!) but a better version is here. I also made the screen better as a whole... gah. Five minutes of extra work and this screen would've been INFINITELY better.

[The Satellite]

Sattelite: Too underdetailed.

Please, spell my name correctly.

[Teilyr]

TriMaster gets my vote, though I'm not crazy about his torches. [shameless plug] Perhaps you'd like the ones from CoD's tileset? [/shameless plug]

No disrespect to the other shots, though. At a critiquing viewpoint..

TS: The trees killed it for me, to be honest. Also, I've never been a fan of Pure's snow.

Evan: Nice shot here. The walls stand out abit too much but, I like the way you've kinda GB'd alot of Minish tiles.

Ebola: Hrm. Looks like you took NoeL's mountains and applied a classic palette to them. I don't like them. At all. Also, the tall grass stands out. Try applying a darker green to it, making it more yellowish, or changing the whole dang cset so it meshes better.

/M/: Nice palette. I can't critique it because it's a WIP.

[The Satellite]

TS: The trees killed it for me, to be honest. Also, I've never been a fan of Pure's snow.

That's.... DoR...