Posted 02 April 2008 - 10:45 AM
Huh... well, first off, let me say that the arbitrariness of the language here irritates the crap out of me.
That being said, on to screen design: It isn't bad. There are a few instances in your overworld shots where you don't cover your corners and it looks a bit empty, and I would recommend you using different detail tiles, but they're not bad.
The Dungeon shots are all a little plain. In design, they're good, but they lack much detail. Layer some bones or something in the dungeon to make it look better.
Anyway, they don't look bad. You might have something decent if you get rid of the annoyingness.