Joelmacool - Lava, wild and furious landscape, the lava's color, it fits the anger-theme quite well. But at the same time it looks just like a typical ZC-vulcano-area and the trees with their calm faces don't really support the theme. In other word if I would have seen the screen elsewhere the feeling of anger wouldn't have come to mind. Then again, if you evoke your own anger (and the screen is helpful for that), you can direct it at them
Maikeru D. Shinigami - I agree with Eddy regarding the right side, escpecially the colors I don't like. Is it like a "cold" other side that pushes you away while your own inner side is wild, enraged and short from falling apart? What does the right side stand for anyway, an actual person that supports you, like your mom? Or religious beliefs to summon up strength from? I have to say you illustrated the situation greatly (and I suppose the feeling of exclusion is just one part of the emotions you want to show?), but it is really rather a situation that is easy to understand (bound to create the fitting emotions) than showing an actual emotion. Also the text feels a bit like cheating, it covers part of the troublsesome (poorly made) side and it is different to having the text below the picture since it is important to bind it to the right side. Then again you can just create a string like that (if it isn't already).
NewJourneysFire - It again illustrates rather a situation, that very well though. I leaves a lot of room for interpretation, which fits well since soo many things can go wrong. The screen itself though looks just chaotical and painful to play through, emotional it is at best confusing and even with the text below - that helps a lot - it is rather interpreting than feeling.
Moosh - Winner for me this "week". The screen itself really isn't that strong, but it is the only one that emotionally touched me, even without reading the text below. I have to say that these kind of situations fascinate me a lot since it is a tricky one for me. To open the door to clearly improve my own life would include destroying my family and ruining their lifes, so I don't open it.
Edited by Naru, 20 May 2017 - 10:35 AM.