It was merely okay. Not intolerably bad, but probably not something I'd play again. I guess the fact I finished it at all is kind of like a passing grade, since I tend to just give up on quests that are irredeemably shit. The biggest suggestion I can offer you is to adopt a longer beta testing period. I heard from others that your test period was one entire day. You need several weeks minimum for people to play all the way through and offer feedback you can act on (and then they respond to those changes and you make further changes etc.) Your enemy placement tended toward overcrowded, which might have been unforgivable if you hadn't also given out the feather (it's a super broken item). Something to keep in mind for the future.
On more subjective opinion territory, I thought you didn't capitalize on the Sonic aspect enough. The writing felt really dry, like those could have been characters from literally any IP and it would have been interchangeable. The Sonic characters aren't blank slates to the degree Zelda characters are, and infusing the cut scenes with that pre-made personality could have made the game a lot funnier and/or more interesting. I suggest you listen to Eggman's "GET A LOAD OF THIS!" voice clip from Sonic Adventure 1 on loop for 9 straight hours if you plan on making Legend of Amy Rose 3. To get yourself in the right mindset.
Alright, thanks for the review. I'll talk all points into consideration. And yes, I do plan on making a Legend of Amy Rose 3, so I'll take all these points you've stated and improve on them greatly. And furthermore, yes I really should've extended that beta-testing phase. Well, I'm already coming up with a list of ideas for the next quest so thanks for stating all these points, and I will be sure to improve on all these in the future.
Wow!
Some people are very strict about your game.
I'm ready for level 6 and I must say, it's been a while since I played a game that I like this much. The difficulty challenge is there. The feather is such a great item. Also, you didn't put a password on your game which is a big plus for me. I can make some minor change that I really appreciate. Like adding the dungeon map for every level or removing the magic meter. I'm still a 8 bombs. Is there any bomb upgrade in this game? In your game picture, I can see that you have more.
Thanks!
Yeah, some people are strict about it, but I personally don't mind. All this criticism helps for me to improve
But anyway, yes there are bomb upgrades, but they're only bought in certain shops located across the overworld.
I hope there is no key issue..BUT.. the key I was given to get the meat was used to enter the Pirate's Hideout ( accessible with the flute) and now I haven't a key for the Northern Chaos Ruins (which I haven't located, I don't think anyway) to get the meat. There must be a key somewhere for the Pirate's Hideout, but I haven't found it. Can you clear this up for me?? Thanks. BTW, I think your quest is commendable..so take any criticism in a constructive manner as you are definitely improving your skill with each effort.
The key into the Pirate's Hideout is where the path to Level 4 is (in the cave where the hungry Goriya is). Once you got that key, you got to head back near to the Northern Chaos Ruins (directly above the South) and one screen above where the Longshot is needed, that's where you play the flute and enter, and then you use your key there. In the dungeon, there's another key to the right side of where you start.