Posted 07 April 2008 - 02:56 PM
billy ronald - 6/10
One of the better of the shots I have seen from you. I find the trees in the bushes to look awkward, but I might not know what I am talking about there. What you did with the tiles seems to work, although there is room for more detail overall.
CastChaos - 6/10
A functional dungeon screen. Not the most awe inspiring, but well organized nonetheless.
Ebola Zaire - 9/10
Beautiful is the first thing that comes to my mind. The best shots make people ga ga over them, and this is one of them. For something that I think is "NoeLesque", you pulled it off well with your own twist to it. And as simple as it is, I love that subscreen. The box borders and that particular shade of green are awesome. You da man.
Evile - 6/10
It looks well organized, but I am not enjoying the color scheme and the combination of certain tiles. Those palm trees don't seem to fit with those larger trees on the upper ledge. They don't seem to mix for the same screen, or more generally, the same quest. I wonder if there are larger palm trees that fit in better (clearly you would therefore need fewer of them in that case).
link1996 - 4/10
It looks like a mess, but not the type of mess that nature intended, followed later by what man intended. It's more like the random mess from making a fruit salad. Even nature's chaos has an order, if you know what I mean. Focus on the shape of the barren foundation (if you ever plan on something that isn't completely flat, which doesn't apply with this screen), then the vegetation, and then its influence from man (the foresters and the pile of logs).
LostInHyrule - 6/10
Ground details are okay, as well as some others. I am not too sure what to say, other than I feel that something more can come out of the overall look of the screen.
Migokalle - 7/10
Looking pretty good. You do have a good sense of how to make a cliff. I think billy can definitely take something positive out of that particular detail, noticing how you work with the ruggedness. As for the ground, it looks pretty good. I am still wondering if there is a better wooden fence for this set of tiles.
Trimaster001 - 6/10
My main criticism is tree inconsistency. Some trees just don't go well with certain other trees, either because of great size differences or different styles (as if made for different tilesets). Tree variety is fine as long as they look like they belong to the same cartoon. The ground detail is not bad, but not the best either.
Ebola Zaire for the win.