Screenshot of the Week 254
#1
Posted 03 May 2009 - 10:13 PM
Link stops and thinks on a warm spring afternoon: "How am I going to get in there?"
Yeah, its a Screen Rebirth shot. *gets shot*
Sheik
ZebraStallion
Have I been here before?
Joe123
Link rides west into Portamus Field.
The dropbox worked great everyone. Thanks! Plus, don't forget to submit those shots in when you can.
#2
Posted 03 May 2009 - 10:18 PM
Nothing bad, nothing great. 6/10 for all of them.
#3
Posted 03 May 2009 - 10:45 PM
Hmm. You should've changed it more from the original sample shot. Some poorly advised walk flags here; the grey stone doesn't look like it should be blocking Link's path even though it is. The water at the bottom edge of the screen doesn't line up with the rock borders. Having four holes touching eachother doesn't make sense, and the small trees look too neat, standing in a row like that. Could also stand to have receive some more of the detailed SD3 grass tiles.
Sheik:
All-around excellent screen. However, as a screenshot, it lacks "action" (in this case enemies) or a subscreen, so it's not very intriguing. Is this the Origins tileset, BTW?
ZebraStallion:
Quite aesthetically pleasing. However, I have to laugh at whoever bothered to build a rope bridge across a tiny gap, which he could have avoided by taking three steps to the right. Loses points for failed logic, but otherwise looks great.
Joe123:
Wow, nice. You've got everything coming together really well here. I even see that you've made good use of some stone cobbles that I couldn't get to look right before. And your transparent water is really looking better now. Very blue. The subscreen isn't perfect, but it's well on its way. Do you have a fairy following Link now?
My vote goes to Joe.
#4
Posted 03 May 2009 - 11:40 PM
Sheik:
All-around excellent screen. However, as a screenshot, it lacks "action" (in this case enemies) or a subscreen, so it's not very intriguing. Is this the Origins tileset, BTW?
Yeah, it's kinda broing, innit? But it was my first try woth Origns so I'm satisfied by what I did this time.
Edit: I was in rush and forget to tell you the obvious: Joe's is excellent this time.
Edited by Sheik, 04 May 2009 - 04:40 AM.
#5
Posted 04 May 2009 - 03:29 AM
Wow, nice. You've got everything coming together really well here. I even see that you've made good use of some stone cobbles that I couldn't get to look right before. And your transparent water is really looking better now. Very blue. The subscreen isn't perfect, but it's well on its way. Do you have a fairy following Link now?
Mm I'm very fond of those path tiles. In a futher update, it might make sense to have them as another ground type even.
And I'm glad you like the water, I've put quite a lot of effort into it now. I still need some decent looking diagonal edges though.
What don't you like about the subscreen?
And yes, I have had for quite some time now.
#6
Posted 04 May 2009 - 03:45 AM
very good my only (2) complains s the 2x2 trees that are in a row I don't like the same tree being used over and over again try some gales trees an ember ones second is the Christmas lights they don't match the feeling unless its Christmas in hyrule and someone made it (yes I don't have sown ) anyways I suggest you should put them in a snowy area like I did in my called quest (yes I'm still doing the idea so don't say copied anyways )
Shiek: 9/10:
yes a 9 you are very good at that tileset he only complain is ground detail you should had flowers, rocks,ect. on the other side of my mind it is good thats why a 9 and as for effort you should keep this:
ZS: 9/10:
good pretty shot and + you can have my
Joe123: 10/10:
hmmmm... OMG I'm speechless the pic just took the words no complains on this one and + pretty good how do you make water blue when you transplanter water?
so.... **Drum rolls** The winner is JOE123!!!!! **people go wilds** and the rest of you you get another
I can't wait to playing your quest Joe123!!!
Edited by Midnight_King, 04 May 2009 - 03:46 AM.
#7
Posted 04 May 2009 - 03:48 AM
I'm glad you like my shot though.
#8
Posted 04 May 2009 - 03:58 AM
#9
Posted 04 May 2009 - 10:27 AM
I'm glad you like my shot though.
You had to do that?!
I simply used another color for the ground:
As you can see, I didn't need to actually alter any tiles. Oh well, I guess it has a lot to do with the palette too... *shrug*
Anyways, my vote goes to Joe... no need to say why
#10
Posted 04 May 2009 - 11:06 AM
Sheik: I was tempted to vote for it, because the way you use the graphics looks really nice.
ZebraStallion: It's really good, but something about it seems familiar.
Joe123: Perfect. Simply perfect. *votes*
#11
Posted 04 May 2009 - 12:52 PM
I simply used another color for the ground:
Yes but the point is that my water doesn't have any brown it it; it's all blue.
Except for the bits that aren't blue, but those bits aren't meant to be blue.
Such as the green plants.
#12
Posted 04 May 2009 - 01:31 PM
#13
Posted 04 May 2009 - 03:12 PM
ZebraStallion:
Quite aesthetically pleasing. However, I have to laugh at whoever bothered to build a rope bridge across a tiny gap, which he could have avoided by taking three steps to the right. Loses points for failed logic, but otherwise looks great.
Hyrule wasn't built for Link, how about people with caravans? They simply CAN'T go around. The bridge is there for convenience.
#14
Posted 05 May 2009 - 04:41 PM
#15
Posted 05 May 2009 - 08:23 PM
QW -
Sheik - Just as Radien said. Lack of action.
ZS - Great shot but it's better in Screen Rebirth.
Joe - Truly amazing. The water feels like EotM.
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