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[Bayta]

Yeah, it's not done yet. But for the most part, it is done. It's supposed to be the 4th Doctor from Doctor Who; the one played by Tom Baker. I just need to add some finishing details like the curls in his hair.







Does anyone know exactly how I can improve it? I know it's not the best at the moment. But if anyone has any comments, feel free to share them.

[Sharon Daniel]

Ears?

[Bayta]

Ears?

His ears are covered by his hair.

Edit: Fixed. Now they are only partially covered by his hair.

Edited by Beta Link, 29 August 2007 - 07:03 PM.

[Limzo]

I thought his hair was curly....

EDIT: Oh, right, you already mentioned that. Never mind. Well, his jacket doesn't really look like it's made of fabric, and neither does his scarf... Perhaps that could be fixed?

Edited by Limzo, 30 August 2007 - 03:58 AM.

[Joe123]

His face is just one colour...
And why is he sad?

[Limzo]

His face is just one colour...
And why is he sad?

Maybe because his face is one colour?

I just noticed that his jacket needs changing. Nobody's clothes fall perfectly vertically.

[Bayta]

Joe123, he's not supposed to look sad, he's supposed to look serious, like he does in the old Doctor Who intros from the 70s. Kind of like this one.



And Limzo, thanks, I'll try to add some shading to his face, make his clothing look a little more like fabric, and fix his jacket.

[trip i fall]

Try making the face wrinkles. Like on his chin, and around his nose.

Otherwise, the expression is near-perfect compared to that youtube video. Although I don't think he's frowning that much.

[Bayta]

Yeah, maybe he's not supposed to be frowning that much. I can fix that in like, 5 seconds. I'll also try adding the wrinkles to his face. That should solve the "His face is only one color" problem too.

Edit: I put in his hace's details, and attempted to fix the way his coat falls.

Edited by Beta Link, 30 August 2007 - 06:38 PM.

[Limzo]

His wrinkles now make him look like an old man. To fix this, you should try to make the bags under his eyes more curved, following the shape of the lower eye lid.

[Evile]

I think he just looks old and sad.

[Bayta]

Ok, update. He should look alot better than before. I darkened his hair, made his scarf look more like an actual scarf, and fixed the wrinkles in his face. He shouldn't look as old now.

[Mitchfork]

Looks good; you just need to get his hair in order.

[Limzo]

So, do we get to see the finished thing?

[Bayta]

Sorry, I haven't worked on it in a while. The main reason for that is because I've never had to make curls in hair, so I don't know how. Don't worry, I'll get it done soon enough.