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The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
#7831
Posted 02 June 2020 - 11:44 PM
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#7833
Posted 06 June 2020 - 02:20 PM
A new quest begins
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#7834
Posted 07 June 2020 - 02:26 AM
In the fist shot, the mountains left and centre are two tiles high, yet when you follow them around to the right it changes to four tiles high. Is the north path going up a hill? If not, the elevations should be consistent. Fix this by making the mountains at the right two tiles high, e.g.
In the second shot, where the top and bottom mountains connect to the right of the pond it looks like the change in elevation is two tiles, which is the same as to the left of the pond. So the ground around the pond should be level, but south of the pond the elevation changes. It makes no sense. Fix this by changing the far right column so the top and bottom mountains are on the same level, e.g.
I see what you mean. I took your advice and fixed them both. How do I post screenshots? imgur and others wont work here. Site says they are not allowed.
#7835
Posted 09 June 2020 - 03:25 AM
#7836
Posted 09 June 2020 - 06:02 PM
A new quest begins
Looks nice but I noticed a lot of your screens appear a little empty. Can you add dungeon borders or more decorations so they aren't as empty?
Also thanks @Noel.
Here's some more shots:
(ignore the map, still gotta work those in)
Edited by Omega, 09 June 2020 - 06:03 PM.
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#7837
Posted 09 June 2020 - 10:25 PM
Looks nice but I noticed a lot of your screens appear a little empty. Can you add dungeon borders or more decorations so they aren't as empty?
I'm just learning this tileset (Vintage Dreams) and adding decorations is on my list of things to do.
For the record, I'm not sure if dungeon borders exist or I will have to create them.
Hopefully I will get better at this as I work with the tileset.
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#7838
Posted 09 June 2020 - 10:44 PM
I'm just learning this tileset (Vintage Dreams) and adding decorations is on my list of things to do.
For the record, I'm not sure if dungeon borders exist or I will have to create them.
Hopefully I will get better at this as I work with the tileset.
Fair enough, still not a bad shot. Also it looks like page 58 of Vintage dreams has dungeon borders.
#7840
Posted 21 June 2020 - 05:07 PM
That looks brilliant Sheik. I really like the effect with the trees in the background as well.
Some old forest screens.
Great atmosphere, especially in that first screenshot. Simply very aesthetically pleasing!
Where did you get those skull rocks? Would you mind if I nick them?
#7841
Posted 22 June 2020 - 01:15 AM
I edited them out of tMC graphics. You are welcome to use them for your own stuff!
Thanks for the feedback and also thanks for the likes everybody.
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#7842
Posted 22 June 2020 - 01:43 PM
Thank you, I'll gladly make use of that since those are probably the neatest skull rocks I've ever seen. I'll be sure to give you credits
#7845
Posted 15 November 2020 - 11:42 AM
Need an opinion on these gears, and if I can make them better?
Edited by IronCreator, 15 November 2020 - 12:27 PM.
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