Deepwood Shades.
Jared
I wonder if I can push that torch?
FefeRawft
oh god how did this get here i am not good with computer
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, Aug 07 2012 01:09 AM
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Neppy
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 01:09 AM
Yoshimi
Deepwood Shades.
Jared
I wonder if I can push that torch?
FefeRawft
oh god how did this get here i am not good with computer
Deepwood Shades.
Jared
I wonder if I can push that torch?
FefeRawft
oh god how did this get here i am not good with computer
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 01:16 AM
Nulled obviously, although I do think this is some of my best work!
Yoshimi - Not bad, but not incredible either, it's well detailed and a great GB screen, but it seems empty and the color of the grass compared to the trees seems... off?
Jared - Decent dungeon screen, but like I said to Yoshimi, something seems a bit off. I think it's the GB push blocks, but I don't know, I'm tired.
Yoshimi - Not bad, but not incredible either, it's well detailed and a great GB screen, but it seems empty and the color of the grass compared to the trees seems... off?
Jared - Decent dungeon screen, but like I said to Yoshimi, something seems a bit off. I think it's the GB push blocks, but I don't know, I'm tired.
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 01:16 AM
I'm in total love with Jared's lava I just like how it's spewing flames. 
It really builds up the hot atmosphere!
PS - Don't use the wooden shield.
EDIT: some criticism, try making the rails that are near the blocks pale-gold like the walls.
It really builds up the hot atmosphere!PS - Don't use the wooden shield.
EDIT: some criticism, try making the rails that are near the blocks pale-gold like the walls.
Edited by Shane, 07 August 2012 - 01:19 AM.
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 01:17 AM
Oh, I didn't even notice the flames coming out of the lava, I like it!
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 01:18 AM
Yoshimi - I'm not a fan of the palette, I think it's the underbrush and maybe something in the trees. The shot itself is fine, though, nothing needs to be changed about it.
Jared - I voted here, it's a solid dungeon shot with neat lava effects, nothing I'd change. I could critique the subscreen, since, well, it needs a little more variety to it; that one-color scheme just looks kind of bland. But the shot is good.
FefeRawft - Best shot, 5 stars.
Jared - I voted here, it's a solid dungeon shot with neat lava effects, nothing I'd change. I could critique the subscreen, since, well, it needs a little more variety to it; that one-color scheme just looks kind of bland. But the shot is good.
FefeRawft - Best shot, 5 stars.
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 01:20 AM
Voted for Jared. Looks like someone is using the pokemon wildfire! I used that before and I will be using those again when I get my tileset picked out...... oh, and nice dungeon screen. 
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 01:26 AM
Yoshimi: Once again, you show how the GB set was made to be used. I have no complaints.
Jared: I like what I see here. The screen is well designed, and the flares coming out of the lava are a cool idea. But they kinda bother me. The lava there is "crusted lava", the mode think, hardening kind that doesn't normally shout out flares of fire. It's a minor thing, but it bugs me a bit; the fire flares might go well with non-crusted lava. In addition, the tiles under the doorways look kind of weird. Shouldn't they be the same as the floor tiles?
FefeRawft: And here I thought the horrible joke screenshot fad died out long ago.
I voted for Yoshimi in the end, although Jared came close. Good job, both of you.
Jared: I like what I see here. The screen is well designed, and the flares coming out of the lava are a cool idea. But they kinda bother me. The lava there is "crusted lava", the mode think, hardening kind that doesn't normally shout out flares of fire. It's a minor thing, but it bugs me a bit; the fire flares might go well with non-crusted lava. In addition, the tiles under the doorways look kind of weird. Shouldn't they be the same as the floor tiles?
FefeRawft: And here I thought the horrible joke screenshot fad died out long ago.
I voted for Yoshimi in the end, although Jared came close. Good job, both of you.
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 02:29 AM
Jared, I really like your screen a lot. What bug me though, is 1) the wildfire (what Russ said), 2) the GB pushblock (I'm sure we have tMC alternatives) and 3) the LttP pot (we have tMC alternatives). I would have voted for it regardless.
Does the player have bombs available when s/he gets into the dungeon? Dodongos would make wonderfull minibosses for the setting and they are weak enough to be handled with three heart containers.
FefeRawft, I like the Triforce on the palm tree. Is it on a vacation?
Does the player have bombs available when s/he gets into the dungeon? Dodongos would make wonderfull minibosses for the setting and they are weak enough to be handled with three heart containers.
FefeRawft, I like the Triforce on the palm tree. Is it on a vacation?
Edited by Yoshimi, 07 August 2012 - 02:34 AM.
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 02:45 AM
QUOTE(Yoshimi @ Aug 7 2012, 03:29 AM) 
Jared, I really like your screen a lot. What bug me though, is 1) the wildfire (what Russ said), 2) the GB pushblock (I'm sure we have tMC alternatives) and 3) the LttP pot (we have tMC alternatives). I would have voted for it regardless.
Thank you very much. And I'll see if I can find those MC ones...I need them so bad. xD
Does the player have bombs available when s/he gets into the dungeon? Dodongos would make wonderfull minibosses for the setting and they are weak enough to be handled with three heart containers.
Sadly, no. Only the sword!
FefeRawft, I like the Triforce on the palm tree. Is it on a vacation?
He told me it's the "full" Triforce.
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 02:46 AM
tough call. Yoshimi's screen is great in every way, but Jared's screen is mesmerizing. what looks to be a skull within the lower flaming lava has me transfixed. Fefe's screen is beyond lame, which seems to be the point. my vote goes to Jared. good one, guys!
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 02:51 AM
QUOTE(trudatman @ Aug 7 2012, 09:46 AM)
good one, guys!
I see what you did there.
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 05:26 AM
Voted for Yoshimi's nice open forest shot. Keep up the good work!
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 09:42 AM
My vote has been taken by Jared's sexy shot.
Really, well done. The lava looks so real in this shot. It's almost popping out at ya!
Really, well done.
The lava looks so real in this shot. It's almost popping out at ya!
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 10:09 AM
QUOTE(Yoshimi @ Aug 7 2012, 03:51 AM)
I see what you did there....
I hope Jared thought it was funny, too. sometimes he likes to make mountains of molehills, so to type, but I thought that was a safe way to make that joke. seriously, though, even though this week's contest didn't have many submissions, it was an amazing set of entries. keep 'em coming!
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Posted 07 August 2012 - 10:23 AM
I honestly voted for FefeRawft. I'm happy to see some lighthearted humor in light of recent events. That said, the other 2 shots were quite good this week.
Yoshimi: The exit points of the screen are perfectly aligned. While this isn't inherently bad, it doesn't feel right in something that isn't supposed to be manmade like a forest. The middle of the screen also feels a little bit empty. Great palette though. 8/10
Jared, very solid shot but the white walls/black roof just bugs me. x__x That said, I like the lava structure of the shot. 7/10
Yoshimi: The exit points of the screen are perfectly aligned. While this isn't inherently bad, it doesn't feel right in something that isn't supposed to be manmade like a forest. The middle of the screen also feels a little bit empty. Great palette though. 8/10
Jared, very solid shot but the white walls/black roof just bugs me. x__x That said, I like the lava structure of the shot. 7/10
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