What a pleasant little demo! I actually enjoyed a ton of the ideas presented here, especially what you did with the giant tree in the Forest Temple, very creative. There are however a few problems with this demo, mainly spelling and grammar being way off. I'd say work on it just a little more or even get someone to help you out with it; I think some people might be willing.
There are some design flaws however I want to address, mainly just inside the Forest Temple and mainly with the blocks. I'd suggest giving blocks that require the bracelet a different sprite so the player can differentiate between what can be pushed and what can't with or without the bracelet. Also, if you want to do a "Kill All Enemies -> Key" puzzle, maybe hint it a little more, I completely missed it the first three times.
Otherwise a fairly solid demo that shows a lot of promise for the project, good stuff! I'm going to give it a 3/5, but I hope to see this project show more promise and improvement as it goes on. Best of luck!
Mayath Island
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Mayath Island
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Overview
This is my second quest (i fixed somes bugs)
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